Quick write blog post

Hey guy's!Today i'm going to be sharing my latest,most mysterious quick write.This is a carry on story so you might see some part 2 & 3 story's of the same one.This is the story of the three girl's.The character;s are basically me and my two beeeeeeeest friend's,Taylah and Camryn. Be sure to check their blog's as well!Take a look down below to see the best story yet,The Three Girls...........................................................................

           THE THREE GIRL'S

Man with a deep dark voice speaking:Hi,come in.See that girl sitting in the corner?She is going to tell us a mix up story about what happened last month.She went through the scariest part of her life.That girl's name is Naomi.So,Naomi,go ahead and tell us your story.

Naomi now speaking:So me and my two most best friend's ever,Camryn and Taylah(I'll be calling them Cami and Tay-Tay for the rest of the story) were playing a game at morning tea.My little sister,Leila,was really annoying us.That day was dress like a book character day.I was Slappy the dummy  from goosebumps,Tay-Tay, was Petunia from Geronimo Stilton and Cami was my owner,the person I want to be my slave.That day was amazing,but something terrible happened when we got home....

"Our house's,there gone!"We shouted.We were all neighbors,and that was,well,fun."Let's ask the Pollocks!"Tay-Tay suggested.So we went over to the house the Pollock's lived in,and when we rang the door bell.An old lady came out from behind the door and I said"Excuse me,may we speak to Mrs.Pollock please?""I don't know who on earth that is!"The old lady said."Must be some Halloween trick"The old lady's husband whispered not very quietly."But this is the house the Pollock's were in this morning!"Cami explained,shaking."But by then,they slammed the door in our faces."Well that was rude,I was in the middle of my sentence."Cami said.

"Must be the wrong street."I said."Nope."Tay-Tay said,pointing at our street sing."Oh no."I said.We ran into the middle of were our house's were and ZAP!We were surprised by the bright white light that shone in our eyes.We finally awoke,looking around."Cami?Tay-Tay?Were are you?"Now I know in real life I'm at least half a centimeter taller than Cami,but I looked up and she was at least twice the size of me!"You're a wooden puppet!"Cami said,looking at me with an astonished look on her face.I touched my skin and it really was wood!!!"And ,Tay-Tay,you...your a mouse!"Cami screamed. Cami was on a chair working me as a real puppet in front of an audience.

"What's going on?"I whispered,eager to find out."I think we turned into our book characters!"Cami explained."No way!Impossible!"I said.The audience started to cheer for us.And Tay-Tay,your so cute!"I said,in a high pitched voice."Oh,great.My cat's at home are now going to chase me."She said ."Whoa,what happened to my voice?!"She squeeked."This is beyond weird!"I said.

We all thought this was the danger.But we all thought absolutely wrong.More danger was coming our way..........................

So guy's thank you for reading my post today and I hope you enjoyed the mystery.

!!!BYE!!!

Interdependence

Hey everyone and today I'm going to be telling you about how we've been learning about our interdependence learning muscle.If you don't know what interdependence means,it means you rely on other's to do there job and then you do your's.Anyway,May 1st,we had to do a back to school project of what we had to do in the holiday's. To tell the rest of the class of what we did in the holiday's,we could either do art or rap.(Just saying,it isn't lunchtime so not the food kind of wrap).I chose art but if you did you would also have to do someone else's topic who was doing rap.He chose the skate park and I found doing his one really fun because I liked designing the skateboard's and scooter's.I chose the movie's because in the holiday's I went to go see Beauty and the Beast with Piper N and that was really fun even though my 4 year old brother Ollie was scared and at some bit's Piper told me "is it over yet?" but it was still really fun,(but I think I saw Ollie crying). What we had to do is explain what we did in the holiday's by drawing it. I did it by drawing some people in the movie's watching that annoying add that comes' on one's or twice that say's:"please turn your cellphone's off now".On one of the skateboards I did for Navjot was flame's,another was a spider and the last was wavy swirl's.I also did two scooter's,one with wavy line's and the other with curved line's.I think we used lot's of interdependence but forgot to do a dab at the end witch was our one and only action,but I think we still rocked!look down below to see our art!

I hope you guy's liked my term 2 blog post on interdependence,

!!!BYE!!!

20th blog post:Literacy

Hey guy's!!!Today I'm going to be talking about my literacy.We have been doing lots of it and I'm going to show you my best piece.The name is called the abandoned castle and it took me quit a while because I wanted to put in everything I saw in my head.This will come with the plan I did about it (with success criteria):

Success Criteria

• Use the Writing Process (Get Ready, Craft, Revising, Editing, Sharing)
• Structure your narrative through your plan
• Begins with orientation (setting and main character)
• Paint a picture with words (descriptive words and actions)
• Paragraphs (Orientation / Events x3 / Resolution - Ending)
• My writing goal:To really get the reader never want to stop reading  

  

              The abandoned castle

       Hey guys and welcome back to my blog!I’m Samantha.Ann (but you can call me Sam),and today,my blog is going to be about me,my life and this spooky place I just discovered.Right,about my life,I’m very shy at times and a have a really cool friend Lizzy(hi Lizzy!)She one of the best people in the world that girl,she can really keep me company with her “talking”.We’ve known each other for five year’s and meet at the horse stable’s in town.(We love the horse’s and became friends working there)Gotta go,I’m getting creeped out just sitting here typing on my laptop.More soon!

Sam packed away her laptop and set of,willing to find more to blog about.Even though she kept feeling like she was being followed,she was moving forward.Her legs started to shake with fear.The cold icy breeze blew across her face.She was in a forest,filled  with mist and fog.

Sam was a blogger and she wanted to blog about this.It seemed interesting and she thought people would to like to read about it.As she walked forward,she saw red eye’s all around.She started running.Sam screamed as she tripped over some tree root’s...she got up just in time but never got to see what that thing looked like.But one odd thing is that something came falling down on her.It was sticky and fuzzy,like a giant hair ball!

Anyway,Sam came into a clearing.She froze looking at the sight,forgetting all about what she was running from.It was a dark castle,with lightning all around the castle. Sam decided to go inside.As she opened the door,Boom!Crash!Bang!Bash!Meow!,she fell into the darkness.When Sam opened her eye’s,Her arms were in chain’s.She saw that she was in a small,dark room with a door on the other side.She tried to get free as she started to hear things such as roar’s and bat noises.

Meanwhile,her friend Lizzy was following her trying to see where she was going.Lizzy was very concerned  about her friend.She saw something coming towards her,when it came into a clearing,it looked like a human shape.when they were about a meter apart,Lizzy froze with fear in disbelief as she saw what was in front of her.She had black hair,long sleeved black top,grey leggings,black slip on shoes and fang’s.(Oh,by the fang part,you must know what this is)”Your a vampire!”Lizzy cried.”Yea,yea,I get that a lot,but I come harmless”Said the vampire “I’m Elizabeth and I’m here to tell you about  your sister”Elizabeth said.”She’s not my sister,but she sure does act like one!She’s my best friend and I need to help if she’s in trouble.”Lizzy replied.”My father,the cousin of my uncle Dracula,thought that she was the beast that’s been hunting us down for the past three years,his name is fang and he has a lot of red eyes if you’ve seen him.Even though he’s only three years old,his really vicious.”Elizabeth explained as she was looking around,like she was looking for this beast.”Actually,I have seen this Fang.She or he was trying to get my friend but she got away quickly after tripping over a tree root,it was a bad sight”Lizzy explained.”Oh no,now that fang know’s who she is,he’ll try to hunt her down!”Elizabeth said,trying to signal Lizzy to come with her to her home,so they can get Samantha out of the dungeon.As they got there,they ran down the hill that led to the doorway.They opened the door and Elizabeth told Lizzy to step back with her as mist and fog came flowing out of the door.A figure came out of the door.”Who dare’s to enter my home?”Said another vampire,Elizabeth's dad.”Hi daddy!”Elizabeth said loudly.”Oh,hello my little vampire!”Elizabeth’s dad said.So much for a 9000 year old.Lizzy thought as she saw Elizabeth and her dad.(Elizabeth is 9000 year’s old)

Meanwhile,Samantha was once again on her blog,since that is the only thing she could find to do,while it was still charged.

So through this spooky forest like place,I got chased by a monster with lot’s of red eyes and found this castle and now I’m stuck in a dungeon in that castle.My arms are in chains and I have know idea how I got here,but I kept feeling that I was being followed by someone or something as I came here.Anyway,I’m rally exited to bog about this place,but I can’t get free from these chain’s!(If I had a super power right now,it would be the power of super strength or laser eyes so then I can get free from these thing’s!).Well,I think that’s all the info for now,so blog more soon!

Sam hit the send button.I wonder how I’m going to get out of these things.I mean,it may be impossible,but it’s worth a shot. She thought.As she struggled,she got out her cell (actually it’s her mum’s because she lent it to her in case she needed help throughout her blogging adventure)and called Lizzy(Lizzy’s mum did the same thing).Sam(on the phone):Were are you!I’m stuck in this dungeon with chains on my arm’s inside this spooky castle on the other side of this spooky forest filled with mist and fog!!!Help,please!(paint).Lizzy on the phone:Um,I’m in a spooky forest and made a friend.Well,actually,I’m probably by hat castle your stuck in.No worries. My new friend’s dad own’s this place.She’s a vampire!How cool is that? Sam,on the phone:Yea,yea,enough with the fib’s,just get me out of here! Lizzy on the phone:I’ll prove to you  she’s a vampire.She said she’s 9000 years old!I’m not telling fibs.Besides,she has fangs! Sam,on the phone:Are we worried about a vampire who's already dead,or about someone who could be soon!!! Lizzy on the phone:Okay,we’ll come and get you out of there,but,I’m not lying.I’ll show you when she get’s there.Bye!!!

They hung up.On the Lizzy half of the story,Elizabeth’s dad put her down and asked “Who’s this little bite?” Elizabeth’s replied with “It’s cool,dad. Obviously you trapped her friend instead of fang”Elizabeth replied.”Okay let's get her out of there”He answered.As they went inside,Lizzy was getting a bit creeped out.”I’m scared“she said.”Elizabeth,how about you take her to your room while I get her friend?”Elizabeth’s dad asked.”Sure”Elizabeth said.As her dad was walking toward’s the dungeon. He got out the key for the chain’s and went in.Of course,Sam was sitting there gloomily.waiting for someone to rescue her.”You are a vampire!”She shouted.No,well yes,I am,but your friend here wanted me to get you out because I thought you were the best who has been hunting us down”.Elizabeth’s dad replied.”Well get on with it!”Sam said.He got her out and too her to Elizabeth’s room,were Elizabeth and Lizzy were,Lizzy telling her what Sam looked like and acted like.

“Lizzy!”She ran up to her and gave her a big hug.She was so excited to see her.”Now what do we do?”Sam asked.”Let’s go hunt down Fang!”Elizabeth declared.”Yea!”They all shouted.They went out the castle and went to were Fang lived.(In a cave).Sam heard little noises such as:”bla bla bla”.When they got to the cave,Sam and Lizzy realised how big it was,they were too scared to run away.”He’s snoring”Elizabeth said.”That’s good.I’ll go suck his blood”Elizabeth’s dad said.He went up to Fang...ROAR!!!Fang woke up and started to chase them all.”Wait!”Elizabeth said while running.”Fang is only 3 years old,isn’t he,and act’s like a dog,doesn’t he?”Since she was right,her dad nodded.”Fang,stop!”Elizabeth said.”Roar?”Fang said as if it was his version of saying “What?”.”Sit!”Elizabeth said.Fang obeyed.”Go home!”He looked in confusion,and then realised what she said.He obeyed again.”And don’t come back,or you’ll get a smack!”She finished.And then Fang whimpered like a dog all the way home.”Yea!”They all shouted and gave eachother a high five.So Sam had a sleepover at Lizzy’s that night,and Elizabeth’s dad tought her how to fly!How ever,in the cave,fang was making a plan to capture the vampires and humans...

                To be continued…

here is the plan I made for it:

My Narrative Plan

Setting:	Main Character: Samantha (call her Sam) Age:9 yrs old Light green eye’s Straight,long,                brownish blondish hair She wear’s: Two hair-braid’s that connect at the back,blue and green choker,Brooklyn 89 blue and white short sleeved shirt,plain white shorts and purple and green trainer’s	Other Characters: (with Personality / Actions) Lizzy Best,best friends with April Always talk non-stop 8 yr old Light blue eye’s Brown hair Purple shirt pink leggings blue trainer’s. Elizabeth vampire Love’s tomato juice Becomes friends with Lizzy Shy and quiet ,Really smart 9000 year old,red,black hair Black long sleeved top,grey leggings,black slip on shoes,fang’s Elizabeth's Dad Vampire Ruler of dark castle Willing to take risks and really loud! 30,0000 yr old,brown hair,cousin’s with Dracula,black and red top,dramatic cape,long black tights,pointy tap dancing-like shoe’s,fang’s Fang Basicly just a big hair ball with big sharp jaw’s Priority is to hunt down vampire kind 3 yrs old(and really dumb!)	Problem: Get’s stuck in a dungeon in a dark palace she find’s to blog about on the other side of the dark wood’s full of monster’s.There is one kind of monster out there that is trying to hunt down Elizabeth and her dad...	Resolution: Lizzy follows April in a long distance and meet’s Elizabeth.Elizabeth live’s there and know’s all the trick’s to get to the dungeon.Elizabeth’s dad trapped April so they try to stop him.In the end they realized it was all a mistake because there was a monster in the wood’s who try’s to hunt them down,they all get together and stop the monster.
Details: Dark wood’s: Mysterious,misty,dark, curious,spooky Dark palace: Scary,spooky,lightning, stormy	Personality /Actions: Some days shy and quiet,some days she talks a lot.She has a BFF called Lizzy.		Events:	Ending: They all get together after rescuing April and having a big discussion with Elizabeth’s dad and THEY hunt down the monster,Fang.

So I really hope you liked my story,the abandoned castle,and I showed that to you so you know how my writing is going so far.I thought I really liked it and it was really descriptive.So that is basiclly it for my litracy blog,but the last word will be...

!!!BYE FOR NOW!!!

My Favorite Quick Write Story

Hey everyone!I knew I would put my next post on VERY soon.This is a post about my favorite quick write story that I wrote.My favorite part is the end!This is a fiction story but in some part of the holiday's something SIMILAR to this story happened to me.Here it is:

                                    What a mess!(The most boring story).

One Saturday morning I was watching TV. When I was tiered of it,I got every single toy I had out and put them in the living room. It was such a mess! I hardly played with them. Since I didn't want to play with all those toy's,I played Minecraft on my TV. When it was 7.00 at night,dad got home and mum was out getting takeaway's for dinner. Mum didn't see the mess when she left did she. Dad said firmly. I replied with Nope. I'm very-dad suddenly stopped. What are you playing? Dad asked. Minecraft.I said. Can I play!!! Dad yelled. Sure. I replied,passing the controller to him. We played so much,I finally had some fun that afternoon! We were so concentrated on the game that we did not relies mum coming! She screamed so loud when she saw the mess,my ear's hurt! Who made this mess! She asked. She did!He did! Me and dad said at the same time,pointing to each other. Toilet duty,NOW!!! What about dinner?! I asked.Oh no,you and dad will be having veges. And extra pea's! She said. No,not extra pea's,NOOOOOOO!!! I screamed. And Naomi and her dad were on toilet duty for ever after.

THE END.

So blogger's,I hope you liked my post about the girl,her dad and the toilet duty.BYE!