Wednesday, June 28, 2017

Bully writing

Hi guy's!Seen as we have been going through anti-bullying week,we got asked to do this awesome peice of writing to give every bully a message why they should stop.My bully writing is what I am going to be sharing today.I hope you guy's enjoy and see lot's of reason's why you should stop.Read on to learn even more about what we have been working on!

The day the bully stopped.

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THE DAY THE BULLIES STOPPED                               
Arianna Bolden was being bullied.They were her twin sister Brianna's secretly fake friend’s,but Briana didn’t believe that Arianna was getting bullied by her own friend’s.She said they were way too nice.Arianna didn’t want to tell her parents because                                                              she thought they would say the same thing as Brianna because they had met them all.But Arianna did have friend’s that had her back.Roxy,Isabelle,Isabella and Merrisa.Isabelle and Isabella were twin’s,like Briana and Arianna.Oh,and the worst thing is they were all in the same class.It’s a girl’s only school.The name’s of Brianna's friend were Pippa,Melesha,Lilly and Mara.

“Hey,dork.”Pippa mocked Arianna.”It’s time to pay,you got the cash?”Lilly said,smirking.”I……..I……..I,I don’t have any money.I used it on my own lunch.”Arianna stammered.”Well that was stupid,we were going to use it for our savings so we can get a iphone 7 each.”Now that wasn’t the worst they did,that was just a daily thing.The bell rang,this was Arianna’s least favorite time of the day.”See you in class”Melesha said.”Roxy!Isabelle!Isabella!Merrisa!”Arianna shouted.These were the only people who had her back.Not even her own twin sister had her back,so that made Arianna feel really sad.”Hey girl!” Isabelle and Isabella said at the same time,but Arianna’s used to it because they say things at the same time all the time.They don’t even notice it.The only three things Arianna does like about school is that she has the best friend’s you could imagine,she is top in gymnastics and cheerleading, and it’s uniform free.Arianna usually wear those shirts that have a knot tied at the bottom and a short denim skirt.She has dark brown hair that stretches to her bottom,which is always in a high ponytail.Isabelle wears a yellow top with sky blue shorts,and Isabella would wear a sky blue top with yellow shorts.They both have hair out that goes halfway down their backs.But you could think of Roxy as the punk.She wears a dark purple and black shirt and it has a white skull on it.She would wear a light purple pair of tights.Her hair is a purple color,but it wash’s out every 6 weeks.But if you know her well,she puts the color back in as soon as it comes out. But the really weird thing is that Brianna and all her friend’s wear the same thing as each other every day. You know,a short shirt (light magenta) and a black short (and I mean really short)skirt.To be honest,if you describe Brianna,you’re pretty much describing Lilly,Mara,Melesha and Pippa.”Finally it’s time for class!”Roxy said.She was excited about class because she was going to music class but Arianna was going to math.”Okay class,it’s time for a test!The one we all love to do every day.”Mrs.Helena said sweetly.Oh,One thing.The leader of Brianna’s friend’s group is Lilly.Yep.Lilly.They went to kindergarten together, and Lilly would lock Arianna in the kiddy locker’s,and when the teacher wasn’t looking,she would hit and punch her.So this has been going on for about 7 years,and now she is in her class,about to strike what she always does,swap the tests.This works because they have to do it in pencil,and then Lilly rub’s out the names when she hands in her test and when the teacher she is out getting a cup of tea.She re-writes the name’s on the swapped pieces of paper and then she gets straight A’s,and Arianna gets straight F’s.But this time Arianna wrote her name two times on the back of her paper. Mrs.Helena looked on the back of Ariannas original sheet and saw her name twice.They had a meeting at the end of the day.”Now,who’s is this paper?” Mrs.Helena said,curios.”Mine!”Arianna said.”Then how does this piece say your name?”Asked Mrs.Helena showing Lilly’s piece.”Lilly swapped the name’s.I saw her.She does it every time.”Arianna explained.”Is that true?”Mrs.Helena asked Lilly.”Mmmmm…..Yes.” Lilly said,sadly.But,unexpectedly,she did it for the next few weeks,and they still stole her lunch money,and many more problems.So,one day,Roxy finally said”Arianna,you gotta tell your parents.””But,what is they don’t believe me?”Arianna whined.”Well,they have to.”Roxy said,in a bossy tone.”Okay,fine.”Arianna said,So when she got home she said:”Mum, Lilly,Mara,Melesha and Pippa have been bullying me lately,I mean for about 7 years,it started in kindergarten.”Arianna explained.”Well honey,why didn’t you tell me sooner?”Arianna’s mother said.”Because I thought you would say they were way to nice like Brianna said.”Arianna said.”I would never!Now tomorrow morning I am going to talk to the principal.”So,that day,that is what happened.So Mara,Melesha,Lilly and Pippa never,ever,EVER bullied Arianna again.So in this message is that you have to tell your parents straight away,no matter what,and the awesome thing is that they finally became friends,and the nicest kids in school.So if you are getting bullied,TELL YOUR PARENTS!!!

Written by Naomi Apatu.

So guy's I really hope this story helped you to know what bully's can do to you and that it would be a reeeeeeeaaaaaalllllllyyyyyy  good idea to tell your parents.I hope that all bullying will stop sometime,but for now,


  1. Awesome story Naomi I love how it wasn't just a story, it was a message to tell people to stop bullying and to tell their parents.
    From Christina