Friday, August 12, 2016

Candy Land

Hey guy's!This is another awesome quick write story. I have not finished it but it will all be on in my next post.Tack a sneak peek of Candy Land!

Click,clack,I hear my door being knocked on.I went to my door,and no one was there. I did notice everything was made from candy! I went out for a look,I thought I was dreaming!Yes,I did try to pinch myself but nothing happened! Looking around,I did notice that I was wearing a new dress! It was black and red,my two favorite color's.The dress smelt like the best licorice ever.Two twin girl's with pink and purple dress's on came up to me.I saw that they were wearing matching pearl necklaces.At the bottom of one of the necklaces  had an R on it.The other had not an R but an H.The girl's asked me what my name was.I said "Hi,my name is Elizabeth"."Hi Elizabeth,i'm Rose,and this is Holly.We are the twinkling twin's of candy village,we brought you here to help us stop the evil queen of vegetable's".I have to admit that the twin's were very pretty.They both had long blond hair with a tidy fringe at the front.They had bid smile's with lot's of freckle's.Yes.They are identical.Holly started to walk along with me."first up,McDonald street!!!"

So blogger's,that was my Candy land story so far,I'll work on the rest straight away! 

                  Ta-Ta for now! 

My Favorite Quick Write Story

Hey everyone!I knew I would put my next post on VERY soon.This is a post about my favorite quick write story that I wrote.My favorite part is the end!This is a fiction story but in some part of the holiday's something SIMILAR to this story happened to me.Here it is:

                                    What a mess!(The most boring story).
One Saturday morning I was watching TV. When I was tiered of it,I got every single toy I had out and put them in the living room. It was such a mess! I hardly played with them. Since I didn't want to play with all those toy's,I played Minecraft on my TV. When it was 7.00 at night,dad got home and mum was out getting takeaway's for dinner. Mum didn't see the mess when she left did she. Dad said firmly. I replied with Nope. I'm very-dad suddenly stopped. What are you playing? Dad asked. Minecraft.I said. Can I play!!! Dad yelled. Sure. I replied,passing the controller to him. We played so much,I finally had some fun that afternoon! We were so concentrated on the game that we did not relies mum coming! She screamed so loud when she saw the mess,my ear's hurt! Who made this mess! She asked. She did!He did! Me and dad said at the same time,pointing to each other. Toilet duty,NOW!!! What about dinner?! I asked.Oh no,you and dad will be having veges. And extra pea's! She said. No,not extra pea's,NOOOOOOO!!! I screamed. And Naomi and her dad were on toilet duty for ever after.


So blogger's,I hope you liked my post about the girl,her dad and the toilet duty.BYE!