14th blog post:workshop prove it

Hey guys! Today I'm going to be showing you my writing workshop prove it week 7,term three.It only took me about five minutes to finish it.It was not hard at all.I am blogging this because I'd like to show you my learning so far this term.Here it is:

 Workshop Prove It

I learn how to edit properly.

Here is an example:

Try 1.   Hi my name is naomi i am ate yers old i go to parcfal skol and i lif in new zeland

Try 2.Hi my name is Naomi I am eight year’s old, I go to Parkvale School and I live in New Zealand.

So that was my workshop prove it writing week 7 term 3. I was blogging this because I'd like to show people more of my learning and how it is.

I hope you liked that post today so stay in touched for more!