Candy land part two:

Hey blogger's,today i'm blogging this because I love candy.(And because I didn't finish the other candy land).I kinda got the rest of the idea from the wizard of Oz.Here it is from top to bottom.>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Click,clack,I here my door being knocked on.I went to my door and no one was there.I did notice everything was made from candy!I went out for a look,I thought I was dreaming.Yes,I did try to pinch myself but nothing happened!Looking around,I noticed I was wearing a new dress!It was black and red,my two favorite color's.The dress smelt like the best licorice ever.Two twin girl's with pink and purple dress's on came up to me.I saw that they were wearing matching pearl necklace's.At the bottom of one of the necklace's had an R on it.The other had not an R but an H.The girl's asked me  what my name was.I said "Hi,my name is Elizabeth"."Hi Elizabeth,I'm Rose and this is Holly.We are the twinkling twin's of the candy village.We brought you here to help us stop the evil queen of vegetable's".I have to admit the twin's were very pretty.They both had long blond hair with a tidy fringe at the front.They had big smile's with lot's of freckle's.My favorite was there beautiful light blue eye's.Yes,they are identical.Holly started to walk along with me."First up McDonald street!".I was quite astonished and scared at the same time."Can we please tack a different road,I'm petrified of clown's.I estimate that Ronald McDonald will be everywhere!!!" I clammed."OK,i'm sure we can take the long way".Said Rose."We'll go across the meadow of lolly-pop's,go throw the candy cane forest of dome,figure out a way to go over the river of coca cola and then go across ANOTHER lolly-pop meadow and then we should be there.Oh,and you can't have a battle wearing a dress!If you undo your belt your skirt will fall down and you will be wearing a pair of tight's,then

 you will be ready".Holly said,and I did exactly that."Well,aren't I ready to go"?I said."No,actually".Rose clammed."We still need to give you this bow for in your hair.It give's you special power's to help yourself stop the evil queen of vegetable's.I put it in my hair and it turned black and red,and smelt like my dress."Oh,and from now on every thing you touch will become black and red,will smell like licorice,the best,and then when any one else touch's what you touched,they will get electrocuted."Wow!"I told myself.So we took our journey through the meadow of lolly-pop's,meeting a talking kangaroo who was picking some  lolly-pop's for her baby kangaroo who was in her pouch.We went over to greet her.She noticed my bow,she asked if I could help her with a few electrician's that she needed fixed to keep herself and her baby safe.When I finished,we said good bye and headed towards the candy cane forest of dome.We didn't meet anyone in that forest but I was still determined to help thing's in need.We were out of the candy cane forest of dome and we came to the river of coca cola.I saw an ell and he told me that he was an electric ell but the evil queen of veges took all his electricity away!I asked if he would like me to turn him black and red but give him more electricity.He said that,like me,his favorite color was black and red so he was pleased with that.We got across the river by a tree that fell over from the forest.We got across the meadow that led us to the castle.We went inside and saw the evil UGLY queen of veges.She was so ugly I can't describe her.I got my bow ready now that I know how to use it and how to control my power's.I could say it was about a half hour fight.It was challenging,but I managed.When she was defeated,we made her into a veges smoothie and fed it to the twin's dog,Cusco,a little grey dog.When I came back to my house,the twin's gave me a bag of golden dust while thanking me for saving candy land.They said the dust was to use when ever I wanted to come over or if my mum and dad wouldn't let me have lollies. Insted of me opening the door,the twin's pushed me down a black tunnel,as i was thinking it was still a dream.I landed lying on my bed,hearing my mum shouting:Wake up Naomi!I suddenly got up and told my self so it was a dream.but when i went in the bathroom,I noticed the bow in my hair...




So guy's,I hope you liked my post about candy land.I did actually have a dream when I was little about this magical fairy that gave me magic dust but then I heard my mum trying to wake me up so I woke up but at the end of my bed was a container that had this like dust stuff as I thought but it was just sand and sprinkle's my mum made to make me think it was dust so yea,hehe that's were i got the idea.So a,

BYE!!!

Holiday blog post:Bella coming over for dinner

Hey blogger's ,it's me,Naomi and today I'm going to tell you about my favorite part of the holiday's.So, I'll start by getting ready for bed at my Auntie Leisa's house for two night's with my mum,Leila And Ollie.(She was in Fiji with my cousin's for the holiday's).

Once We've all had a bath and cleaned our self's,mum asked: "Would you like Bella Casson to come over at 1.30- pm to 8.30 pm and have dinner with us???"I replied with:"Yes,yes,yes,yes,yes!!!"Leila herd what we were discussing and started to moan."Can I pick someone to come over?!"Well,you can't pick but I'll see if Ava can come over!"Mum say's.So,Leila scream's:" Yay!"(Ava is a 6 year old girl my sister,Leila,made friend's with one time we went to the park).Mum said Ava would have to stay from 8.30 am to 1.35 pm because Bella's coming over.

Ava was going to meet us in Napier by the boardwalk.Once she came,Leila gave her her pen's,sticker's and coloring.(We all got to chose our own and chose some for our friend's.I chose a book of boarders for Bella). 

We all got in my mum's car and drove to McDonald's for lunch.When we got back to my Auntie Leisa's house,we had our McDonald lunch with a movie on Netflix.(They have Netflix on TV).In a few hour's mum said Bella will get here in five minute's.

In five minute's she got here and I gave her the pen's,book and sticker's.She said she loved them.I said we should go watch a movie.And so we did.I turned on Garfield but Ollie and Leila were making so much noise!Since it was that case,I asked Bella if we would like to do anything.Then I remembered we were supposed to get egg's from the dairy.

Mum said we should walk there.It was so much fun walking because we (Me and Bella) kept running ahead!The other thing was that my little brother Ollie held hand's with Bella most of the time.(And it wasn't only when we were crossing the road).

When we got there it was so hot that mum said we can chose an ice block.Me and Bella chose the same and Leila chose some kind that I can't quite remember but they still got one.Ava(Yes,she is still in this part of the story)chose a vanilla flavored one.

When we were half way down Auntie Leisa's street,I asked Bella if she wanted to have a race to the house gate and she said yes.Since she is faster than me,she won the race!We waited for mum because Leisa has an alarm for her house.

We went inside to put our ice block stick's in the bin.We didn't bother to watch for TV so we went into my cousin Toby's room to do some coloring with our little art set. 

After five minute's I remembered Houdini there bunny,(He keep's escaping from his cage),and asked Bella if we would like to get him out.She said okay.We went out to the back yard and I showed Bella his cage.we tried to get him out and we finally did.BUT,he escaped under the house!I called mum and she hurried over.In five minute's mum got him out and we were so relieved.

We went inside,again doing our coloring.It was 5.30pm and Ava just left.Me and Bella were having a humongous bubble bath made with water and dish-washing liquid.We were having a big competition about who can make the best bubble throne.Ollie was jugging but I told Bella we probably shouldn't let Ollie judge because I knew he would always chose you.Oh,and guess what,he did!

Mum said she had to go out to get the pizza's for diner.My Auntie Rebecca and my little cousin Leo,(you might have heard of them if you read my post:My Surprising Holiday,came over to watch us.I asked Leo if he could try to say Bella.He just walked away that looked like it meant he was shy.

I asked Leo if he would like to come into the spa-sized bath.He didn't say anything but he got into board short's and got in.Leo is only a few month's younger than Ollie and even Ollie is a big pain so Leo is a bigger pain!Once he got in he cried and moaned to get out.

I said there were some bath toy's to play with on the side of the spa bath.(Then he got interested and stop moaning and crying\

).It was so fun with Leo,Bella and Ollie.Bella made up this game we could play in the bath.This is how you play:

What you need:

1. ocean animal toy's
2. three people:Two player's and one starter
3. other little toy's toy's,e.g:toy dinosaurs,toy boat's

Method:

1.The starter will say go and the two player's will try to find the most under water toy's as they can.

2.The starter will say stop and the player's will need to stop trying to find the under water toy's.

3.the player's will count how many under water toy's they got.If they got some that are not UNDER WATER toy's,they do not count in there point's. 

So,that is how you play.In about ten minutes after we finished the game,we decided to get out.(It was 6.30).I got in my p.j's,and Bella was back in her cloth's,mum came back with the pizza base's and topping's.(And yes,this story is nearly finished!)Me and Bella put on our topping's.While we waited for them to cook,we watched some of the Garfield movie.When the pizza's were finished cooking,we got to eat them on the couch,watching Garfield at the same time.

Once we finished dinner,me and Bella started to pack up because her mum was coming over in five minute's.Her mum was here and we packed up just in time. I gave Bella her stuff and she left.She said she lost her sock's,but as soon a she left we found them!(so Bella,if you're reading this,we found you're sock as soon as you left Leisa's!)

Here is a drawing Bella made on our play date:

So guy's,I hope you liked my holiday post!And Bella,I hope my dad gave you're sock's back by now!BUY!!! 

P.S:Here is a question for you!:)
IF YOU HAD A PLAY DATE,HOW WOULD YOUR PARENT'S EMBARRASS YOU?MINE IS MY PARENT'S TELLING ME TO DO JOB'S AND CHORE'S!!! :-( (HE HE)

P.P.S:my next post will be on very soon!

16th blog post:2017 calander art

Hey guys! Come on down and buy the brand new amazing masterpiece made by Naomi Apatu,an eight yr old artist.This art is very unique. So, if you wanna buy some,here is a photo of this awesome art.
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This is the awesome art.
Only $10 so come and buy this amazing art and use it!

                                                                                 Also comes with note pad,diary and card!



The most popular part of the art is the side that has the sun. Doesn't it just stand out?!
So come down an buy the amazing art by Naomi Apatu!



This art is one of a kind and super cheap!

14th blog post:workshop prove it

Hey guys! Today I'm going to be showing you my writing workshop prove it week 7,term three.It only took me about five minutes to finish it.It was not hard at all.I am blogging this because I'd like to show you my learning so far this term.Here it is:

 Workshop Prove It

I learn how to edit properly.

Here is an example:

Try 1.   Hi my name is naomi i am ate yers old i go to parcfal skol and i lif in new zeland

Try 2.Hi my name is Naomi I am eight year’s old, I go to Parkvale School and I live in New Zealand.

So that was my workshop prove it writing week 7 term 3. I was blogging this because I'd like to show people more of my learning and how it is.

I hope you liked that post today so stay in touched for more!

Candy Land

Hey guy's!This is another awesome quick write story. I have not finished it but it will all be on in my next post.Tack a sneak peek of Candy Land!

Click,clack,I hear my door being knocked on.I went to my door,and no one was there. I did notice everything was made from candy! I went out for a look,I thought I was dreaming!Yes,I did try to pinch myself but nothing happened! Looking around,I did notice that I was wearing a new dress! It was black and red,my two favorite color's.The dress smelt like the best licorice ever.Two twin girl's with pink and purple dress's on came up to me.I saw that they were wearing matching pearl necklaces.At the bottom of one of the necklaces  had an R on it.The other had not an R but an H.The girl's asked me what my name was.I said "Hi,my name is Elizabeth"."Hi Elizabeth,i'm Rose,and this is Holly.We are the twinkling twin's of candy village,we brought you here to help us stop the evil queen of vegetable's".I have to admit that the twin's were very pretty.They both had long blond hair with a tidy fringe at the front.They had bid smile's with lot's of freckle's.Yes.They are identical.Holly started to walk along with me."first up,McDonald street!!!"

So blogger's,that was my Candy land story so far,I'll work on the rest straight away! 

                  Ta-Ta for now! 

My Favorite Quick Write Story

Hey everyone!I knew I would put my next post on VERY soon.This is a post about my favorite quick write story that I wrote.My favorite part is the end!This is a fiction story but in some part of the holiday's something SIMILAR to this story happened to me.Here it is:

                                    What a mess!(The most boring story).

One Saturday morning I was watching TV. When I was tiered of it,I got every single toy I had out and put them in the living room. It was such a mess! I hardly played with them. Since I didn't want to play with all those toy's,I played Minecraft on my TV. When it was 7.00 at night,dad got home and mum was out getting takeaway's for dinner. Mum didn't see the mess when she left did she. Dad said firmly. I replied with Nope. I'm very-dad suddenly stopped. What are you playing? Dad asked. Minecraft.I said. Can I play!!! Dad yelled. Sure. I replied,passing the controller to him. We played so much,I finally had some fun that afternoon! We were so concentrated on the game that we did not relies mum coming! She screamed so loud when she saw the mess,my ear's hurt! Who made this mess! She asked. She did!He did! Me and dad said at the same time,pointing to each other. Toilet duty,NOW!!! What about dinner?! I asked.Oh no,you and dad will be having veges. And extra pea's! She said. No,not extra pea's,NOOOOOOO!!! I screamed. And Naomi and her dad were on toilet duty for ever after.

THE END.

So blogger's,I hope you liked my post about the girl,her dad and the toilet duty.BYE!

My Passion Project

This is my passion project.It took me quite a while to get done but I did manage.Here it is!!!

this is my passion project reflection:

Passion Projects Reflection

Please answer all of the following questions

Describe your passion project. What was your learning in it? What were you trying to produce?I was trying to produce a video of me singing  a new song I’ve never learnt.I chose He Honore.

How far did you get with your passion project? What would have helped you to get further?

On the last day of the passion project’s I just got it to my mail and it was taking so long to get it loading so I left it loading all weekend and today, Monday, I’m trying to get it to go on the passion project tracking sheet.

What was the most challenging part of your passion project?Well that was overcoming singing the song in front of the iPad.(sometime’s I get stage fright).

What was surprising about your passion project?

That I actually got it done and it turned out exactly how I wanted it to be!!!

Did you follow your plan well? Why or why not?to me yes and no because it took me longer than I expected but I followed the instructions I made perfectly I do say so myself.

Which learning muscles did you use the most while you were working on your passion project? How did you use each one?I used the noticing muscle when something went wrong and I used perseverance when I tried to fix it when it got really hard.

Which learning muscles did you find difficult to stretch during passion project time?I would have to say my absorption muscle because I wasn’t always on task.

If you were allowed to pick a new passion project, what would you choose and why?

It would be playing the guitar because I haven't fully learnt it so i’d love to do more.

What was your favourite part of passion projects?

It was getting it done in time because I thought I wouldn’t make it but I did!

I hope you enjoyed my passion project blog post. 

BYE!!!